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Title: Behind the Scarlet Door
Chapter: Standalone
Author: Boots
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Pure PWP.
Warnings: ROLEPLAYED ABDUCTION AND DUBCON/NONCON, MAY BE TRIGGERING. Male X male sex, orgy, bukake, character with a genital piercing
Pairing: Aoi/Ruki/Tora/Saga/Kai X Shou
Disclaimer: Boys belong to PS Company, I own the story only.
Summary: It was an ordinary day for Shou, until he was suddenly snatched off the street, driven to an apartment, tied up and used by a bunch of men as a living sex doll . . . but are things really as they seem?
Comments: Written for the Consent Play square of my Kink Bingo card. (Yes, I conquered one of the squares that I thought was totally unwriteable!) The concept of a certain character having a piercing in a strategic place comes from the wonderful ldybastet’s fics. Story concept inspired by the classic porno Behind the Green Door, via the book The Other Hollywood : The Uncensored Oral History of the Porn Film Industry by Legs McNeil and Jennifer Osborne.

It had been a rather ordinary day at the start for Shou, really. He went to the PSC office, had the usual bandleader-and-managers meeting, rehearsed some with the band, stopped at a convenience store for some soymilk and a couple of onigiri . . .

And then found himself suddenly grabbed off the street and pushed into the back of a car.

His captors blindfolded him right away. He couldn’t see who it was, couldn’t see where he was being taken. All he could do was sit there between the two people who had grabbed him, taking shallow breaths . . .

Until the car stopped, and he heard doors opening, and he was pushed out, roughly. Something was pressing into his ribs – he knew he had to do whatever it was these people wanted. They propelled him, and he walked.

“Christ, I hope there’s nobody in the fucking lobby,” he heard a voice murmur as he was shoved through a door, followed by a dull thud and an “ow” – as if someone had been elbowed in the ribs.

He felt himself steered into an elevator, and he heard the pings as it ascended. First floor, second, third, fourth . . .

At the eighteenth floor, it stopped, and he found himself guided out, then down a hall. A fumbling of keys in a door, and then he was being pushed through. Somebody was pulling upward on one leg, and he lifted it, feeling his shoe being yanked off. He did the same with the other leg.

He was led through a room, and down a corridor . . . He swallowed hard. His heart was pounding like it never had before. He had no idea what was going to happen, none at . . .

“Crap, move the doggie toys!” a voice said. “He almost tripped!”

He was steered into another room, and stopped. Now, he was standing there, shuddering, feeling hands on his body, pulling at his clothing . . .

“What do you want from me?” he said out loud, as he felt himself being stripped by . . . how many pairs of hands were on him? Two people were pulling off his shirt, another unfastening his belt and zipper, two more grabbed his pants and underwear and yanked them down . . .

“What do you think?” said a voice that hadn’t spoken before. “Now, not another word, or we’ll have to gag you.” Fingers were stroking his lips. “And we have other plans for that pretty mouth.”

The hands were grabbing him again, shoving him roughly onto a bed. His arms were pulled over his head, and he felt something tie around the wrists, binding them together . . .

“You sure you know what you’re doing?” said another voice, sounding a bit too concerned given the circumstances.

“Of course I do,” said the voice that had spoken about the doggie toys earlier. “I’ve done this plenty of times before.”

“And almost cut off my circulation,” muttered the voice that had hoped nobody was in the lobby.

“Hey, I didn’t hear any complaints.” The hands left his wrists, having finished their work. There was the sound of the other end of the cloth being tied to the bedpost . . .

Then a mass rustle of clothing, as if the kidnappers were all getting undressed. Shou just lay there, his heart nearly pounding out of his chest, wondering what was going to happen, who was going to do what . . .

“Now, what are we going to do with this pretty thing here?” Another voice that hadn’t spoken, and a hand running down his chest, finding a nipple and lightly pinching it. Shou found himself arching up, gasping.

“What do you think we’re going to do?” Shou heard the creak of the bed, felt hot breath on him, a small male hand resting on his stomach . . .

And then a mouth closing over the nipple that had just been pleasured. He found himself writhing a little, crying out. Oh, God, this was happening, this was really happening, they were going to have their way with him, every single one of them, and he didn’t even know how many of them there were . . .

A second mouth was on the other nipple, and Shou felt a light scraping on his skin, as if from a facial piercing. This one seemed to prefer licking to sucking, drawing his tongue back and forth over the hardening bud, while the first one continued to suck him, mouth tugging the sensitive flesh . . .

His legs were being pulled up and out, and he heard the squish of a lubricant tube – but meanwhile, there was another hand on him, on his cock, the fingers bearing the distinct calluses of someone who played a stringed instrument, running lightly up and down the shaft . . .

Shou found himself starting to writhe, and moan. He couldn’t help it. Despite the situation, despite the not knowing what was going on, or maybe because of all that . . . it was sensory overload, all of it, too much, almost too much . . .

A lubed finger was pushing into him with utmost gentleness. It was thick, obviously part of a big, manly hand, and Shou found himself moving against it, trying to take it in.

“Easy,” said a voice – the one that had expressed concern before. “We don’t want to rush things.”

Shou just lost himself in sensation, in the lips and tongues on his nipples, a seemingly endless expanse of soft and wet; in the fingers on his cock, touching lightly, as if to not overstimulate; in the sensation of him being penetrated, and dear God, there was a second finger sliding in along the first, and it was a different man, since it was not quite as thick as the first . . .

Both fingers moved inside him, opening him up, spreading apart gently to stretch him, well-choreographed like two people used to working together. Like, for instance, fellow members of a long-lasting band.

“Toy first,” Shou heard, and then the fingers were pulling out of him, and everyone was moving away. He felt the loss of warmth, of wetness, and he found himself shivering.

There was a hand tenderly stroking his hair and lips on his face, and his legs being grabbed by two men, pushed apart again. “Look at that,” said Doggie Toy Man. “What a gorgeous ass.”

“Enjoy it while you can,” said Lobby Man, as there was the sound of a drawer opening and closing. “You probably won’t get it again.”

Oh, God, he was a fucktoy to these men, wasn’t he? He was an object to be played with and drooled over, a living sex doll. And the idea was creating a slow, steady burn of heat deep within him.

The squish of lube again, and something was pressing against his entrance, something made of a firm rubber. Shou gasped as it kept pressing, filling him, the sensation cool as opposed to the heat he’d experienced earlier . . .

And then, whoever was wielding the toy flipped a switch in the bottom. There was suddenly a buzzing, a vibration emanating from the inside out, thrumming through every nerve ending in Shou’s ass, making him let out another cry.

“Oh! Oh, oh my God . . .”

The toy was moving inside him, starting a gentle thrust, and with every centimeter there was a fresh bundle of nerves being stimulated, a fresh wave of maddening sensation breaking over Shou. He writhed, trying to thrust against it, wanting more of it, but it was moving slow, too damn slow . . .

There were voices somewhere in the pleasurable fog. One person saying, “Damn, you brought out the good one for this, didn’t you?” Someone else saying, “Look at him . . . look at how gorgeous. Hell, he didn’t look like that when it was just him and me!”

And there were hands everywhere, moving over his sweat-soaked skin, the two that were holding him caressing his thighs, someone else running fingertips lightly over his face, another caressing his chest and stomach . . .

He didn’t care who these people were anymore, or why they were doing this. He just cared that there was a toy inside him that was driving him slowly nuts, and that the finger on his face was pushing into his mouth, and he was sucking it eagerly, and my GOD, was that a second toy running along his cock now, oh yes, oh yes it was, it was moving in circles, sending fast, throbbing vibrations through the very core of him.

“Ahhh!” Shou cried. “Oh, my God, what are you doing . . . what are you doing . . .”

He had never before dreamed of something like this, of nothing but pure pleasure, of surrendering entirely to the will of other people who were wielding toys at him like erotic weapons, stroking him from the inside and outside, making him feel like he was going to burst . . .

“Enough,” said a voice. “We don’t want him to come too fast. We have other uses for him . . .”

The toys were switched off, and he felt the one pull out of him, and he was gasping, feeling the loss of the solid sensation, the vibration, like a junkie feeling the loss of his most beloved drug.

But he didn’t have time to mourn, because he heard the creaking of the bed as someone moved. There was a man straddling his shoulders, and a cock being pressed against his lips. He opened up, lifting his head so he could take it in.

His legs were being pushed apart again, and someone else was kneeling between his thighs. Another erection was pressing into him, and this one was big, oh, yes, so big . . .

He was being filled from both ends. He sucked on the cock in his mouth, feeling a hand on his hair as the person thrust in and out . . . “Fuck,” the voice said, “you’re even better at this than I remember.” The one in his ass was still filling him, bit by bit, and he heard a voice saying, “Look at him take it all.”

Another voice in reply, “He’s used to a big one, remember?” And then, the one who had expressed concern for him before, saying, “Stop it!”

Shou hoped he meant the teasing and not what was going on, because he didn’t want this to end, ever. He felt the cock inside him start to move in and out, slowly, and the one in his mouth begin a rapid thrust, and he sucked hungrily.

He raised his own hips, and pushed them forward, wanting more of that huge cock that was speeding up now, thrusting harder, deeper, filling him until he thought he was going to explode, but in the nicest possible way.

“God, even after all this time, you’re still so damn tight,” murmured the man who was fucking him, and Shou could only moan in reply, but the moan was muffled by the cock in his mouth, which was thrusting faster now. He sucked it hard, trying to take in as much as he could . . .

Then, a voice saying “My turn,” and both erections pulled away from him, Shou whimpering in frustration. But then, there was a shift, and people moving around the bed, someone else straddling his face, pressing against his entrance . . .

A different cock, as big as he one that had been penetrating him, pressed against Shou’s lips, and he opened up eagerly, flicking at it with his tongue. The one pushing into him was not as big as what he’d had before, but still substantial, filling him nicely. “Oh, fuck,” the man between his legs gasped. “Even better than I remember.”

Shou was now the very willing center of a sandwich, a toy for both these men, and any fear and uncertainty he’d had when this thing began was washed away by the sensation of huge, solid cock pressing over lips and tongue, of something hard and delicious moving inside him, filling him, stimulating nerves that were already hot and sensitive . . .

“You’re loving this,” moaned the man he was currently sucking, his hand gently brushing over Shou’s hair, “aren’t you?” Shou could only moan around that glorious, enormous thing in reply.

And then, another voice, the man who, a seeming eternity ago, had voiced the warning about the dog toys on the floor. “Don’t I get a turn? He’s never had me before. He needs to experience the monster cock.”

A groan, and then the man currently inside Shou pulled out. “Fine. But don’t take him all the way yet. You know who has the rights to that.”

“I can’t make any promises on that.” A shift at the foot of the bed, another cock head pressing against Shou, but this one felt different, somehow . . .

When it started to press inside, he knew why. There was something else there at the tip. Something hard, a little bump that pressed against sensitive nerve endings in the most delicious way, making him groan anew . . .

Somewhere in another galaxy, he heard someone murmur, “Won’t the piercing break through the condom?”

Piercing? The man taking him was pierced? Shou didn’t want to know how much that would have hurt. It didn’t matter. All that mattered now was that wonderful little bit of metal was rubbing against his insides, stimulating him when he didn’t think he could take any more stimulation, making him moan and writhe all over again . . .

“That feels good, doesn’t it?” said the man between his legs. “Wait until it gets deeper.”

The other man gently slid out of his mouth, allowing Shou free reign to gasp and groan and let out sounds of pleasure as the thing moved inside him, thrusting in and out, getting deeper each time, brushing against every sensitive area he had . . .

And then, the little metal barbell rubbed right against Shou’s prostate, and he nearly screamed.

“Oh, that spot, is it?” said the man fucking him. There was a series of sharp, hard little thrusts, assaulting him with pleasure, rubbing against the spot again and again. Shou cried out, writhing so hard he was practically thrashing, hands straining at his bonds. The blindfold came loose, and slipped off, but it didn’t matter, because his eyes were squeezed tight from pleasure.

“Yes!” he cried out. “Oh, oh, oh, yes . . .”

He was breathing hard, and the other man was breathing hard, and he heard moaning around him . . . it seemed that two of his assailants were so turned on by the sight that they were going at it with each other now. There was another shift as someone else moved to the end of the bed . . .

The wonderful, pierced thing pulled out of him, and its owner said, “All right, he’s yours to finish off.”

There was someone between his legs again, and this time, he was being filled with a huge cock, the same one that had been in his mouth before. He was able to raise his legs and let the other man in deeper, because there was nobody holding onto him anymore, they were all engaged in their own activities, from the sounds of the moaning . . .

He felt a familiar, muscular body lying on top of him, and lips on his. He kissed back, tenderly, hotly, the two men’s tongues sliding against each other, a dance played out many times before given an extra layer of spice now.

The enormous thing in him was moving, and he was lifting his hips, thrusting along with the other man . . . who leaned over and whispered to him, “Open your eyes. Look at what’s going on.”

Shou obeyed, and found himself looking up at Kai, his beloved, who was giving him one of his beautiful smiles even as he pounded into him. He lifted his head, clinging to his lover’s body, and peered over his shoulder.

Saga was bent over, hands on the bed, with Tora behind him, gripping his hips, pushing his huge cock in and out of his tight, beautiful ass. Turning his head, he saw Ruki on all fours at the foot of the mattress, just below where Shou and Kai were. Aoi was standing beside the bed, fucking him hard – and on the outstroke, Shou could see the flash of metal at the tip, the piercing that had pleasured him so much.

It was a porno come to life, a tableau of male passion, beautiful men writhing against each other, panting and moaning and sweating, erections pistoning in and out of asses, and the sight of it was driving Shou higher and higher toward the most intense climax of his life . . .

He screamed when he came, arching off the bed, splattering himself and Kai with his come, and then Saga was crying out, and Shou could feel the wetness land on his body as well . . .

Kai was the next to climax, pulling out of Shou, coming all over his belly. Tora pulled out of Saga as he cried out, and although he didn’t get Shou entirely, he did manage to splatter some drops on his skin. It was enough.

Aoi pulled Ruki upward so he was leaning against his body, cock pointed forward, and Shou and Kai shifted so that Shou was right in the path for when Ruki climaxed, pouring his orgasm all over his protégé. Aoi pulled out of Ruki, stood over Shou and finished himself off with his hand, making sure that every drop landed on the vocalist’s flesh.

Finally, they all collapsed, flopped all over the bed wherever they could fit, panting and heaving, laughing a little. When Kai undid his bonds, Shou touched the stickiness all over him, caressing it as if it were the holiest of sacraments.

After a long pause, Saga raised his head. “Shou, you’ve got to get less elaborate fantasies,” he said.

Shou laughed, wrapping an arm around Kai and pulling him closer. Oh, God, he didn’t think it was possible for him to love this man more, but he did. He’d pulled it off.

He remembered very well the night when he and Kai were in their apartment, drunk as hell after some PSC mandatory-for-bandleaders-to-attend function or another. The beverage that had been served had been Kai shochu – Shou-chu. They were amused as hell that it was named after them both, so it seemed to be destiny that they drink it. A lot of it.

The stuff acted like a truth serum, because they ended up talking about what their dirtiest, nastiest, most forbidden fantasies were, the ones they normally wouldn’t tell anyone about. And Shou had outlined a wish to be kidnapped and used as a fucktoy by a bunch of hot men – noncon by consent, if you will.

Kai had promised to make it happen. And the next day, through the haze of the worst hangover of his life, he decided he was going to deliver on that promise.

Finding his co-conspirators had been easy. Tora/Saga and Aoi/Ruki were, like them, deeply committed couples – but also adventurous, and not adverse to sharing with other willing parties. Plus, all of them except Aoi had at least some sexual history with Shou. (Kai figured that after this experience, there would be a lot more sharing with these men in the future – especially Aoi and Ruki, given Shou’s reaction to that piercing. Better that than getting pierced himself. Besides, he wasn’t exactly adverse to the idea of sharing with them, either).

There had been communication involved ahead of time, including Shou giving them blanket consent to do what they wanted. This was why they couldn’t do it with just anyone - that was an enormous trust Shou was placing in them. Noncon by consent could only be done with a lot of love.

The only thing they didn’t agree to ahead of time was the time and place of Shou’s “kidnapping.” That was to be a complete surprise to him, with Kai keeping track of his schedule and coordinating with the others. (Ruki had volunteered his and Aoi’s place for the deed – he’d just forgotten to pick up Koron’s toys beforehand).

Now, Shou was lying here on the bed, pleasantly dazed, the men who had participated in his fantasy all around him, as spent as he was.

“Thank you,” he told them. “Thank all of you. This was . . . more than I dreamed of.”

Tora reached over and clasped his hand. “You know we wouldn’t do this for just anyone, right?”

Shou closed his eyes, squeezing Tora’s hand. “I know,” he said.

“Well, I had fun,” Aoi said, raising his head to look at Shou. “And from the looks of it, you did, too! Never experienced a piercing before, did you? Well, maybe now Kai can get a . . .”

Kai’s face bore the expression of a cartoon coyote about to have a 10,000-pound bolder dropped on his head. Ruki leaned over to put a comforting hand on his shoulder.

“They have toys that simulate that sensation,” he said. “I’ll help you find some.”

“Killjoy,” Aoi said.

Saga yawned and snuggled closer to Tora. “Shou, of all fantasies,” he said, “why did you have to pick Behind the Green Door?”

He was rewarded with a lot of blinking and blank looks. “Behind the what?” Ruki said.

“Oh, come on, you can’t tell me you haven’t heard of it!” Saga said. “It’s one of the most classic pornos of all time! It’s about a woman who’s kidnapped off the street and taken to a club where a whole bunch of people make love to her in front of an audience. Well, we didn’t have an audience – just that.” He nodded at the camera, attached to a computer, which had captured Shou’s fantasy for a video souvenir. “I’m just glad Shou didn’t want to do the trapeze part.”

There was more blinking, and this time, all the heads swiveled around toward each other, then toward Saga again. “You’ve got to be fucking kidding me,” Ruki said.

“Dead serious,” Saga said. “It’s in the film. Marilyn Chambers does a bunch of guys while on a trapeze.”

“Saga,” Shou said, “is there a porno that you haven’t seen?”

Saga was going to answer, but Tora answered for him. “No. No, there isn’t. But at least I reap the benefits.”

They all laughed, and Shou snuggled against Kai again, closing his eyes. He felt very happy right now, and content, and loved. Oh, so loved.

And then, his reverie was interrupted by a voice saying, “Did someone ever put his fucking soymilk and onigiri in the fridge?”


( 18 comments — Leave a comment )
Aug. 18th, 2012 09:04 pm (UTC)
*silent screaming*

Why the hell did I think that was a good idea to read this on my very crowded bus back home? Silly me...I'll leave a more detailed comment when I've recovered from my brain matter leaking out of my nose while trying to keep in my squeals of pleased disbelief XD

Edit: Ok, I finally picked up my babies from my cousin's and ended up staying there for dinner. And now I am home…


*pants* *coughs* *huffs* okay I got it out there XD You should've seen me on the bus…I was trying not to wake the lady sleeping beside me by biting a chunk of my scarf not to squeal and flail like a crazy person. This was…oh god, so goddamn perfect!

I just loved how you put this in Shou's point of view. The entire time you could feel the apprehension, and the helplessness and the intense pleasure relinquishing all control gave him. He really truly enjoyed being treated as a toy, overstimulated, filled at both ends, and oh my that made it so fucking hot. I love how Kai gets skittish about them mistreating him, and the little hints you throw here and there about each of them: Tora's piercing, Ruki's tongue, and my favourite I think, Aoi's appadravya piercing. If there's one thing I real love about LdyBastet's Aoi, its that highly unusual, very sexual piercing, and you made such good use of it (with pretty appropriate descriptions of the sensations I might add…ahem…). Not to mention Kai's huge cock…unf!

And there was tenderness too, and love, and the underlying issue of trust that is instrumental to these kinds of fantasies which you included in there which makes the fic all the more commendable. Shou's trust is absolute, not only in Kai but in all the men that make use of his body, but what's really gorgeous about this too is the trust Kai has for the men he entrusts his lover with. The fact that he lets them be responsible of Shou's safety and pleasure make it all the more touching in many ways. And of course there's the ending with all the couples being all lovey dovey with each other yet there's this group sweetness that goes beyond the boundaries of their couples which I really enjoyed.

I'm really happy you actually decided to go with that square and got so ambitious about it and fucking nailed it! This was amazing and hot and it makes me want to write more orgies. Beautiful work my dear, as expected of you ;) (and now I'm off to bed XD mission accomplished) xoxo

Edited at 2012-08-19 03:41 am (UTC)
Aug. 20th, 2012 12:35 am (UTC)
Thank you! Oh, I'm so glad you picked up on the whole trust thing. The most key line in the fic is when Tora says, "You know we wouldn't do this for just anyone, right?" Kai picked his co-conspirators in this very carefully - they include Tora, who's known Shou longer than anyone else, and Ruki, his mentor, two people who can be absolutely trusted with Shou. Everyone involved except for Aoi has been Shou's lover at one time or another = and Kai would have made sure that Shou was attracted to Aoi and wanted him to participate before bringing him in, Ruki's significant other or not.

So, yeah, the big thing here was that Shou gave them the gift of absolute trust and they rewarded him with the gift of absolute pleasure, which adds up to love. In essence, that's what that square is all about. (When I first got that on my Kink Bingo card, my initial reaction was, "Playacting rape? Oh, HELL no!" But I was only looking at the surface of the kink. It's when you look underneath that you see what's really going on there).

I'm also glad that you picked up on and liked my little clues! I started planting them from the beginning (when it becomes apparent that these boys are utter phail as kidnappers - leaving Koron's dog toys lying around and interrupting the abduction for the proper Japanese removal of shoes). I was hoping the reader would be able to figure out who was involved by the time Shou finally opened his eyes. And, yes, the whole thing is in Shou's POV - more appropriately, the POV of Shou lost in his fantasy. He knows who these men are, but he blocks it out because he's so getting into the idea of being at the mercy of these men. (I did phrase it to kind of clue the reader in that Shou knew, at least somewhat, what was happening to him - I say his heart was pounding out of his chest, but I never say whether it's from fear or excitement. He also wonders "who was going to do what to him," not whether anything is going to happen at all).

And I just had to use the piercing. The whole idea of it is damn hot (and Shou most definitely enjoyed it!)

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! (And I'm very amused about you reading it on the bus!)
Aug. 20th, 2012 01:43 am (UTC)
Seriously, reading hot fic in public is like a guilty pleasure of mine...But this time I really got my money's worth XD I was silent squealing all the way lol

I loved how Shou was apprehensive, yet calm about this because he wanted it so much. And I picked up on trusts issues instantly, its often the very first thing I think of when reading this kind of storyline, and I really appreciated it in yours. It was lovely. I actually laughed when they paused for the shoes actually XD I was like "oh my...silly boys" and of course the doggy toys XD It added a layer of comedy to a story that could've been dead serious in many aspects and it was refreshing!

Once again, I loved everything about it. Lovely, perfect work my dear xoxo
Aug. 20th, 2012 02:36 am (UTC)
The layer of comedy just had to happen - it was needed to cut the intensity of the situation a little, really, though I used it only at the beginning and the end - the tender post-sex moment giving way to humor about Saga's thing for porn, and then the end line (where I deliberately returned to the style of earlier in the fic by not attributing it - but anyone who's read my GazettE stuff knows that my Ruki tends to communicate in F-bombs. ~_^) (The answer to Ruki's question, by the way, is the soymilk and onigiri were left in the car, but Shou didn't mind. Kai bought him replacements later, though).
Aug. 20th, 2012 02:50 am (UTC)
It was a welcome addition to the whole story, and cut the tension just perfectly. I'm not surprised, Kai would definitely be the good boyfriend type and make sure his darling got some nourishment after his delicious ordeal ;)

Btw, I just posted my new KB instalment, you should read it before it gets drowned under all the spamming from Gaze yaoi and j-rock scans -___- Lol I'm curious to have your take on it but I think you're gonna like it ;)
Aug. 18th, 2012 10:10 pm (UTC)
To be honest...I don't think I've ever read anything like this before, I guess not many seem to write it. But this was too good, I really did love it XDD
Aug. 20th, 2012 12:39 am (UTC)
Thank you! Quite frankly, I wouldn't have written it if it wasn't on my Kink Bingo card, but I'm glad I did. It's definitely a tricky thing to do - presenting roleplaying an extreme fantasy without giving everything that's going on away at first. I'm glad you thought it came out well!
Aug. 20th, 2012 07:32 am (UTC)
wooooooooooooooooooow... o_o i don't even know...what to comment. lol. it might be a "good wow" since it's really not a "bad wow". XD the last line. fufufu... thank you for sharing. =)
Aug. 21st, 2012 02:09 am (UTC)
Hee, hee, I couldn't resist that last line. It was suddenly a little bit of reality intruding after the shared fantasy - "Oh, crap, the onigiri!" (They'd left it in the car, by the way. Kai ended up buying Shou fresh soymilk and onigiri later).

Thank you for reading, I'm so glad you enjoyed!
Aug. 20th, 2012 09:37 pm (UTC)
Holy crap -dies of overload- This was awesome and I had fun trying to guess who was who before you actually said who they were. Awesome job as always!
Aug. 21st, 2012 02:05 am (UTC)
Thank you! The correct answers to who was doing what, by the way, are . . . 1) Ruki and Tora were doing the initial mouth-to-nipple action, while Saga was stroking him; 2) Ruki was wielding the first toy, Aoi the second one, and Kai had his finger in Shou's mouth; 3) Tora had the first turn screwing him while Saga was getting the oral action; 4) Their places were taken by Ruki and Kai, respectively; 5) Aoi got a solo turn (with the extra added attraction; and finally 6) Kai finished Shou off while the other two couples took care of each other - the only part that Shou saw.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading!
Aug. 21st, 2012 03:43 am (UTC)
Well, I was right for the most part xD I was close, let's go with that haha.

Again, great job!
Aug. 21st, 2012 01:17 am (UTC)
finally I can leave comment to this fic. the internet in my grandma's house is really sucks.
this is.... killing my brain XD
though I'm little confused why the hell Shou not recognize the voice of his bandmates and lover O_O he's way too innocent(?) XD
Aug. 21st, 2012 01:59 am (UTC)
Oh, there's actually a reason for that. Shou was so into his fantasy, into the idea of being kidnapped and ravished, that he blocked out who the various people were. He was pretending that they were strangers. The story is written from the POV of Shou-lost-in-the-fantasy. Reality only comes back when the blindfold is off and he opens his eyes.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
Aug. 21st, 2012 04:07 am (UTC)
wait.. wait..
give me a second to breath..

That was just FUCKING AWESOME!!!!

Thanks for the clue you gave I can guess whose tongue or whose dick right :)
didn't Saga (or Ruki?) fuck Shou??
The first one was definitely Tora (None can miss the 'so big cock', huh)
The third one was Aoi with his pierced cock.
The last was the one who has the right, Kai.
So, who did get the second turn? Or Did i miss something?

Edited at 2012-08-21 04:23 am (UTC)
Aug. 21st, 2012 11:19 am (UTC)
Okay, here's how it went: During Tora's turn, Shou was giving Saga oral. After that, Ruki took a turn, and Shou was giving Kai oral. Now that I think about it, Saga is the only one of the group who didn't actually penetrate him - but that's okay, Saga got Shou all to himself in an earlier Kink Bingo fic! XD

Thanks so much fore reading and commenting!
Aug. 25th, 2012 06:23 am (UTC)
Jesus. Now I know why I keep coming back to your fics. The way you write is just lgjewlkgjew;lkgejwglew;kjgew. Like seriously, only a keysmash and a lot of fangirling will take care of the feelings I have when I read your stuff. I wasn't hugely into the A9 smut fandom before I discovered The World Of Boots, but damn am I a fan now. I love how many ways sweet little Shou has been debauched, held down, fucked sideways, and oh my jesus this is the cherry on top. (And can I just say that I really like it when writers give Aoi a cock piercing and do it well?)
Sep. 20th, 2012 03:21 am (UTC)
Ack, I'm so sorry I'm this late in replying back! That is a HUGE comment and I am very, very glad for it. Shou is a very fun one to work with, especially in a pretext like this, because I don't believe he's as 100% sweet and innocent as he lets on - there's hints of an underlying dark streak (like when he gets too enthusiastic about hitting people on Alice Nine Channel). I see him and Kai as very similar in this regard, which is why I like to pair them together.

The piercing idea actually came from ldybastet's fics - it was just so damn ht there that I had to use it in this case. It's hot, it's unexpected and it's extra pleasure on both ends - an enhancement for Shou's fantasy he wasn't expecting!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, and I'm sorry again I was so late!
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