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May. 11th, 2015

Dear Mary Sue author on Tumblr whose stuff I read out of pure trainwreck syndrome/curiosity: Please, please, please do some research on BDSM. Please. Because the one thing you do NOT want to do with a riding crop is use it directly on your partner's genitals. Furthermore, that is most likely NOT going to result in multiple screaming orgasms. There's going to be screaming, all right, but not in ecstasy.

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hamhamheaven
May. 12th, 2015 02:59 am (UTC)
Oh dear lord! Let's hope whomever she (or he) is dating never asks for anything kinky because that's a disaster waiting to happen.

Edit: I'm nosy, so I went looking through Tumblr, and think I found who you mean. *shakes head*

Edited at 2015-05-12 03:27 am (UTC)
puss_nd_boots
May. 12th, 2015 05:06 pm (UTC)
Yep, it's someone who's been writing several of them that keep popping up on various band tags on Tumblr. She's written several about various GazettE members and a few about Diaura - she also did a couple of Kai kink fics (one of which had him striking out at the Sue in genuine anger during kinky sex - another no-no).
vampire_kiki
May. 12th, 2015 05:37 am (UTC)
What you had mentioned sounds like it's from a bloody torture scene, not a BDSM one. ^^;;;
puss_nd_boots
May. 12th, 2015 05:08 pm (UTC)
That's pretty damn accurate. I have a feeling the writer just has no idea at all how hard a riding crop can hit. O_O
vampire_kiki
May. 13th, 2015 05:56 am (UTC)
Yes, they seem to have no idea. That shows us how lack of experience and research can be harmful to your writing.
misumaru
May. 12th, 2015 06:39 am (UTC)
*winces forever* Yeah, they'll be screaming all right! -_-;
puss_nd_boots
May. 12th, 2015 05:09 pm (UTC)
And probably not able to walk or sit down correctly for a week or more. Ow.
leifang666
May. 12th, 2015 10:39 am (UTC)
Well, maybe if you just kind of flick the crop? Not so much a hit, but the promise of one? A tap. Like, "I'll hit you here, if you don't behave" with no intention of doing it.

I could write this, but I don't see the point.
puss_nd_boots
May. 12th, 2015 05:12 pm (UTC)
Oh, no, this wasn't a tap - he flat-out hit her between the legs. The best part was this was all supposed to be 1) fantasy fulfillment for her birthday and 2) something to make her feel better because she had a bad day at work. Well, the excruciating pain will definitely distract her from her work problems . . .
ankaraferus
May. 12th, 2015 05:06 pm (UTC)
fucking ow!
puss_nd_boots
May. 12th, 2015 05:21 pm (UTC)
Yep, precisely. If that's the author's definition of kinky fun, I'd hate to see her write a torture scene.
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