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Birthday Fic Written!

Wrote Hiroto's birthday fic over the last couple of days and worked on editing it last night. Had to take out an enormous infodump that was at the beginning of the story because it was taking waay too long to get to the main action, but I'm saving the infodump material to recycle in future fics. Some of it was too good to give up entirely - a flashback to Hiroto's coming-of-age party, a drunken guy loudly questioning Shou and Hiroto about that woman in Blue Flame and a friendship scene between Hiroto and Nao (I'm trying to work more with interrelationships other than the two pairings; there's also a Shou/Tora friendship scene toward the end of the fic). A Hiroto and Mogu scene stayed, though - it was just too cute to cut out, and there hasn't been enough Mogu in my fics.

And I think the ending came out well. Saga only has a small appearance in this fic, but it's a doozy. ~_^

Hoping the translation of Nico Nico comes out soon, because that has got potential fic material written all over it. (If Saga says just one thing that could be twisted around to be a reference to the sex video . . . ~_^) So glad to have the dork-free version of Blue Flame, too. Angsty boys = PREEETTY. (And I am so loving Hiroto's more mature look the more I see it).

Oh, and as for the scenes with the woman? Not as extreme as I expected, though Version 2 is yet to be seen. He's going to be getting a lot more down and dirty in Shou's birthday fic, anyway. ~_^

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silentjrocker
May. 2nd, 2011 09:59 am (UTC)
i'm dying to see blue flame's other version, and now, i'm dying to read that fic (>w<)
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